Hey guys posted this before and got some negitive reveiws but hey that's a part of writing so I followed some advise and changed it a bit I wanted to know if it was any better thank you so much!!!!
Quite a few twisting corridors and halls later Helle leads me into a huge room, the Royal Dining Hall. Even though it is deep inside the palace walls there are candles everywhere, and rosy smelling incense burn on gold and silver thuribles. Warm yellow light dances around the room from flickering
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