Saturday, May 5, 2012

How Does The Beginning Of My Book Sound?

I don't know if it's too fast or stupid or whatever. Tell me whatever comes to mind about the story. Thank you.
I stare upon the lifeless body. She lays there in the casket with no expression. Her skin has lost all of its color and the beauty is sucked from her face. Her hair has given up its gorgeous golden glow and is as white as it was in the winter. The worst thing I must look at is her sweet mouth. She is of course, wearing her favored red lip stick, but it looks wrong. I know right under

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