Wednesday, June 6, 2012

What Do You Think Of My Story? Opinions On What I Have So Far Please!?

So, I am writing this story for fun about a pair of twins- Ella and Annabel. They were born in different time periods. It is complicated but can you tell me what you think of my story so far? And, if you have any suggestions for the rest of the story it would be nice. Thanks! Story(If you think if a cool name for it that would be helpful, oh and this is part of the beginning that I took out) -
I stirred and awoke, the sun was peeking out of the windows. It was Monday morning. I sighed, a

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